Changeset 29801 for other-projects/nz-flag-design

Timestamp:

2015-03-20T14:17:51+13:00 (9 years ago)

Author:

davidb

Message:

Further word crafting

File:

• other-projects/nz-flag-design/trunk/index.html (modified) (2 diffs)

other-projects/nz-flag-design/trunk/index.html

@@ -55 +55 @@
           <a target="_blank" href="http://cosi.cms.waikato.ac.nz">Centre for Open Source Innovation</a>
           <a target="_blank" href="http://cosi.cms.waikato.ac.nz">(COSI)</a>,
-          we've put together a web-browser based tool that let's
+          we've put together a web-browser based tool that lets
           you try out your ideas for an alternative.
         </p>
@@ -86 +86 @@
         </li>
         <li>
-          3. Interact with 2D paint application (primed with your
-          previous choices) in which you develop your idea.
+          3. Interact with an embedded 2D paint application in which you develop your idea.
         </li>
         <li>