Changeset 35218

Timestamp:

2021-07-02T13:45:42+12:00 (3 years ago)

Author:

davidb

Message:

Further text refinement

File:

• main/trunk/model-sites-dev/eurovision-lod/collect/eurovision/transform/pages/about.xsl (modified) (1 diff)

main/trunk/model-sites-dev/eurovision-lod/collect/eurovision/transform/pages/about.xsl

@@ -247 +247 @@
       </style>
       <p>
-        In the following visualization, which shows the votes countries awarded to Italy,
-        the size of the boxes are proportional to the total number of votes that
+        The following visualization shows the votes countries awarded to
+        Italy—the winning country—in 2021.  In the visualization,
+        the size of the boxes are proportional to the total number of votes a particular
         country awarded to Italy, with colour used to highlight differences between
-        Jury and Televoting: a reder (hotter) colour shows that the popular (tele) vote
-        from that country was more keen (hotter!) for the song than the jury.
+        Jury and Televoting: a reder colour shows that the popular/tele vote
+        from that country was more keen—hotter if you like!—for the song than the jury.
+        Hover over a particular box for a tooltip that give a more detailed breakdown
+        of the voting from that country.
       </p>
       <div id="treemap-voting-for-winner-2021-divchart" style="width: 900px; height: 600px; background-color: #fff; margin-left: auto; margin-right: auto; margin-bottom: 12px;">