Changeset 35831

Timestamp:

2021-12-18T15:03:20+13:00 (2 years ago)

Author:

davidb

Message:

Some wording adjustments

File:

• main/trunk/model-sites-dev/eurovision-lod/collect/eurovision/transform/pages/about.xsl (modified) (2 diffs)

main/trunk/model-sites-dev/eurovision-lod/collect/eurovision/transform/pages/about.xsl

@@ -61 +61 @@
           won as far back as 1998.
           There have been songs in many different languages over the
-          years, although most are in English these days. This
-          doesn't matter, however, because music is a language we all
+          years, although the majority are in English these days.
+          <!--
+          Overall, the main thing is that 
+          music is a language we all
           know how to speak.
+          -->
+          <!--
+          This doesn't matter, however, because music is a language we all
+          know how to speak.
+          -->
         </p>
         <p>     
@@ -132 +139 @@
       </p>
       <p>
-        Alternatively, use the quick-search box to query the DL collection for a term that sparks
+        Alternatively, use the quick-search box to query the Digital Library collection for a term that sparks
         your interest. For example:
         <ul>